With the guidance of Alicia Rasley, a veteran editor and writing teacher, you will learn to identify passive prose—both boring passages and grammatical passive voice (“The ball was hit”)—and revise in more action.
Of course, this isn’t – for the most part anyway – true.
Nora Roberts may have the occasional head hop as head hops are sneaky, insidious, and creep in when you’re not looking. But by and large the point of view shifts that get Nora her reputation for head hopping aren’t really head hops at all.
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In this free, 5 day, workshop I will address the legal ways to shift point of view within manuscripts.
We’ll cover shifting point of view at chapters and scene breaks and the more controversial changes of point of view which happen within scenes.
Every time I teach a class on point of view and I mention head hopping someone tells me that Nora Roberts does it.After a while days of hard work you need a splash of fresh air and a friend to spend some alone time.Hence we present sexy bitches ( pun intended), your best mate to make your day.Most important, you’ll learn how to “feel” the action of the scene and use words to create that experience for the reader.And you’ll get the expert advice of Alicia on how to edit in the energy into your prose.Living alone without your family, friends as well as loved one’s are not at all easier.